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The City ... [roleplay]

(OCC: my first time roleplaying, so sorry if I'm not doing it right, and sorry for my baaaad english :p)

Al was sitting on the edge of a cliff, near the city, she had no where to go, she had trained for all these years so that she could become a freedom fighter, she even left home.
"why does everything have to be so damn hard!" she sighed, and looked back at her bike Lotus, who happily started to drive around in circles...
"No we're not going in to the city yet, we don't know anybody down there!"
she got silent for a moment, thinking:
#Hehe well it would be fun to start a fight, but then again, without knowing who I'm fighting with ....# she stood up staring at the city, should she go or turn back?

Well of course that wasn't a qustion, she would think twice over! she laughed over her own thoughts. She had told her family that she wouldn't come back for at least a year, so it would be kinda embarrasing to come back, without having done anything at all.

She sighed a last time before she went over to her bike, who started the engine by itself, happy that they would finally drive! She sat on her bike, and rode of, on the road to the city, wondering who she would meet there....

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on the road she sees a yung mouse not mutch older then her walking alonge the road towards the city

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(OCC: do you think you could write a little bit more? :) and Wasn't it a male mouse? xD)

Al rode her bike with style, she was proud of herself, finally able to control the Lotus, her bike wasn't like the others, it was more like a wild horse, and only she could ride it, she didn't notice if there was anyone else on the rode, but her bike did, her bike made noises as to alert her, Al a few meters from the city, she took of her helmet and looked around for another 'fellow', she couldn't see much, the sadn whirveling in the wind, it didn't help much though, she sighed, got of her bike, and began to go closer at the place she thought there would be another mouse. She stood still waiting for a response, she didn't dare to speak yet, but somehow still managed to look angry and shout "Who's there?!"
Her bike stood by her side, making noise with its engine, worrying for Alí

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(i ment your character sees my character^^' and uh... i wasnt sure what to start writing...)

the second mouse suddenly apears within sight and calls back "I'd ask the same!" its a male mouse, apparently a victim of the war. he has a big bag on hes back and looks rather confused or lost "do you know how far it is to the sitty stranger!?" he looks her straight in the eyes when he talks to her

(sorry i dont wriite mutch i like keeping my self simlpe when i write)

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(OCC:that's ok :) I got a little confused)

Al's body stiffned, she saw a big male in front of her, she didn't know what to say or do, she just stood there staring at him, with her mouth open, then she got back to herself, realizing she was staring, she stepped back a little. "I'm Al, and you?"
She was on her way to the city too, she thought of asking him join if he wanted but she didn't know how to say it "tag along if you want to" she said with a harsh voice, not meaning it, but she couldn't control herself when there were others she didn't know around her, she would just "man" herself up, and act tougher than she is. She took a good look at him, her eyes following his face and down to his proteses, what?! his legs.... their?
Al got schocked when she saw them, he must be a freedom fighter! she smiled a bit "you're a freedom fighter??" her voice more calm but still alert.

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(OCC:that's ok :) I got a little confused)

Al's body stiffned, she saw a big male in front of her, she didn't know what to say or do, she just stood there staring at him, with her mouth open, then she got back to herself, realizing she was staring, she stepped back a little. "I'm Al, and you?"
She was on her way to the city too, she thought of asking him join if he wanted but she didn't know how to say it "tag along if you want to" she said with a harsh voice, not meaning it, but she couldn't control herself when there were others she didn't know around her, she would just "man" herself up, and act tougher than she is. She took a good look at him, her eyes following his face and down to his proteses, what?! his legs.... their?
Al got schocked when she saw them, he must be a freedom fighter! she smiled a bit "you're a freedom fighter??" her voice more calm but still alert.

he looks back at her a little confused "sorry no... you most think i am because of my legs right? most people do, but i didnt loose them in a fight" his ears twitch a little as if hes geting nervus "look i dont like strangers but you seem ok and i as you may have noticed i dont have a bike so i gues i can ride whit you, if thats what you mmean" he smiles a little "my name is Sniper by the way, its nice to meet you Al" He holds out his hand to her in a friendly way

(if you're not quite sure how long he is, he is approximately 1.80cm)

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"well yeah I thought you were one because of the proteses" she got a bit embarrased and blushed lightly.
Al wasn't used to people taking out their hand for a handshake, she didn't quite know what to do, she just responded with a smile, "well i don't like 'em either" she mumbles, not really sure how to react to him, he was kiind nothing alerting about him, but she was still a little stiff in her body, and her bike made an uncomfortable noise by hearing he wanted to ride on it, Al looked at Sniper again but this time with a huge grin on her face, she relaxed a bit "it's weird you don't have a bike I must admit! but yeah you can ride with me" her bike stopped the engine, in protest. She mounted her bike and waved for the big mouse, she wasn't comfortable with it but it was only to the city, a few minutes ahead, "Don't listen to my bike, it has its own mind sometime!"

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"well yeah I thought you were one because of the proteses" she got a bit embarrased and blushed lightly.
Al wasn't used to people taking out their hand for a handshake, she didn't quite know what to do, she just responded with a smile, "well i don't like 'em either" she mumbles, not really sure how to react to him, he was kiind nothing alerting about him, but she was still a little stiff in her body, and her bike made an uncomfortable noise by hearing he wanted to ride on it, Al looked at Sniper again but this time with a huge grin on her face, she relaxed a bit "it's weird you don't have a bike I must admit! but yeah you can ride with me" her bike stopped the engine, in protest. She mounted her bike and waved for the big mouse, she wasn't comfortable with it but it was only to the city, a few minutes ahead, "Don't listen to my bike, it has its own mind sometime!"

"thats ok i know some bikes do that" he smiles "i work whit so many bikes thats why i dont own one because i can'r really find one that fits me" his ears are twitching again and he looks around "look if youre bike dont want me to ride whit you its ok i can walk but i think we should keep going... i dont like this plase and i never stay long on one plase"

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Al chuckled "well even if she doesn't want to, she has to! because I said so, now jump on before I change my mind" she meant it in a friendly way and kept smiling at him, for a reminder, he seemed more nervous than her, that kind of comforted her a bit while waiting she looeked interested in him "you do bikes?" she was a little surprised to hear that he worked with them but didn't own one himself. "and yeah, they can be pretty hard to understand". The bike started the engine, accepting Al's choice, Al smiled proud of herself.

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Al chuckled "well even if she doesn't want to, she has to! because I said so, now jump on before I change my mind" she meant it in a friendly way and kept smiling at him, for a reminder, he seemed more nervous than her, that kind of comforted her a bit while waiting she looeked interested in him "you do bikes?" she was a little surprised to hear that he worked with them but didn't own one himself. "and yeah, they can be pretty hard to understand". The bike started the engine, accepting Al's choice, Al smiled proud of herself.

he looks a little confused at her at first but seems to reter do as she sais than walk alone and jumps on behind her "wel..." he starts not really sure how to explain "i dont build bikes i only program them... i work alot whit micro chip for AI's like your bike has, its sorta like building brains for bikes if you get what i mean"

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"oh.... that's nice! I only thought they had some of our DNA's and that's it" she felt kinda dumb, but what the hell, she didn't know much about building their brains she only knew how to fix them if they got broken and ride them, she speeded up at the fastest, "hold on tight!" the bike went on one wheel and then of the road! she drew really fast, enjoying the speed, she didn't know if Sniper liked it too, but she didn't 'care' that much, she just wanted fun. She looked back at him, sending him the 'are you okay' - look, in a few minutes they would arrive in the middle of the city.

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"oh.... that's nice! I only thought they had some of our DNA's and that's it" she felt kinda dumb, but what the hell, she didn't know much about building their brains she only knew how to fix them if they got broken and ride them, she speeded up at the fastest, "hold on tight!" the bike went on one wheel and then of the road! she drew really fast, enjoying the speed, she didn't know if Sniper liked it too, but she didn't 'care' that much, she just wanted fun. She looked back at him, sending him the 'are you okay' - look, in a few minutes they would arrive in the middle of the city.

sniper squeaks suprised and holds on thight "y... yeah im ok you just suprised me" he doesn't seem to be used to speed or physical contact, something most men usually like

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Almost in a split second they arrived in the middle of the city, she made a harsh stop, took her helmet of, and showed her now kind of fluffy puffy helmet hair (xD) she looked with a cheeky smile on th ebig male "aren't used to speed are ya?" she stood of her bike "well then this is the city, my frst time here too, so ehere are you going to?", right after that the bike jumped, sending sniper of her. Al pushed annoyed to the bike "please will ya!?..."

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Almost in a split second they arrived in the middle of the city, she made a harsh stop, took her helmet of, and showed her now kind of fluffy puffy helmet hair (xD) she looked with a cheeky smile on th ebig male "aren't used to speed are ya?" she stood of her bike "well then this is the city, my frst time here too, so where are you going to?", right after that the bike jumped, sending sniper of her. Al pushed annoyed to the bike "please will ya!?..."

"no not really... woah!" he falls of her bike as it jumps and lands on the dusty ground "ow..." he looks up at her and smiles a little embaresed "shes really stubborn isnt she?" he looks at the bike and then back at Al "its my first time in a big citty like this too so im not reallt sure where to go... i think im just gonna go look for somevere to spend the night" he looks up at the sky "its starting to get dark..." He folds back his ears as if he is afraid that the sky will fall on him and rises abruptly from the ground 2 are you hungry? i wanna thank you for the lift si i thought i might buy you some dinner as a thanks"

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She runs over to Sniper to check on him, she reaches her hand out for him "I'm so sorry, you okey?" she looked annoyed at the bike, and then back at him again, looking him directly in his eyes this time, almost like finally giving response from when they first had seen eachother, she smiled at him "she's not dumb, she just have a great personality like every girl should have..... just a little bit more reserved, but don't mindher, she's always like that to strangers!"
She looks at the sky too, but doesn't seem to have a problem with it being dark, she looked at Sniper, and up again, but she figured that she shouldn't ask too many questions, so she ignored her damn feeling to ask about everything.
"why don't we find a place to stay together?" she realised what she said and turned it, blushing "I don't mean you know like together - together, I can sleep on the floor?" she gave him the 'I don't know' - look, but then smiled again "if we split the money up for the room, it's gonna get cheap, and then you can give breakfeast toorrow" She had a big smile on her face, she thought her idea was great!

(OCC- i need to sleep soon that's why they need to find a place :p)

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She runs over to Sniper to check on him, she reaches her hand out for him "I'm so sorry, you okey?" she looked annoyed at the bike, and then back at him again, looking him directly in his eyes this time, almost like finally giving response from when they first had seen eachother, she smiled at him "she's not dumb, she just have a great personality like every girl should have..... just a little bit more reserved, but don't mindher, she's always like that to strangers!"
She looks at the sky too, but doesn't seem to have a problem with it being dark, she looked at Sniper, and up again, but she figured that she shouldn't ask too many questions, so she ignored her damn feeling to ask about everything.
"why don't we find a place to stay together?" she realised what she said and turned it, blushing "I don't mean you know like together - together, I can sleep on the floor?" she gave him the 'I don't know' - look, but then smiled again "if we split the money up for the room, it's gonna get cheap, and then you can give breakfeast toorrow" She had a big smile on her face, she thought her idea was great!

(OCC- i need to sleep soon that's why they need to find a place :p)

(i need to sleep too^^' so im gonna go to bed after i write this but we can continue tomorow)

"i know what you mean... i used to be like that to..." he seems a little sad but when he looks at her again he smiles "togeter sounds good" he smiles and bushes a little too "and i get what you mean, but i dont think i can let you sleep on the flor... maby if we find a plase where they got a coutch? that sounds better then sleeping on the flor dont you think?"

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(OCC: sound good to me :))

Al got surprised by his answer, but she didn't complain, she just smiled at him, she gave him a kiss on the cheek and smiled big time, "thanks... now let's find a place to sleep!"
She got her bike and started to walk beside her new friend Sniper, who she actually was very happy to have met.

(Night xD sleep tight, btw just so you know, tomorrow when they wake up, she has snuck up beside him, so she's sleeping next to him xD she likes to cuddle haha _:p)

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[ooc (GM interjection) - just changed the title to add the [roleplay] "tag" as in the far distant past I've had a request from some people who weren't that interested in the roleplays still feeling compelled to look at the topic as they weren't sure if it was a discussion or not :) Sniper, write from your character pov not another person's character pov, makes things less confusing ;) though seems like you've worked it out already :) Good to see you guys having fun!]

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(OCC: ok :) and thanks, yeah we're getting in to it xD)

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(OCC: sound good to me :))

Al got surprised by his answer, but she didn't complain, she just smiled at him, she gave him a kiss on the cheek and smiled big time, "thanks... now let's find a place to sleep!"
She got her bike and started to walk beside her new friend Sniper, who she actually was very happy to have met.

(Night xD sleep tight, btw just so you know, tomorrow when they wake up, she has snuck up beside him, so she's sleeping next to him xD she likes to cuddle haha _:p)

sniper blusshed even more when she kissed his cheak, it was the first time somone showed this kind of affection to him, it wasn't that he didnt like it but it was confusing, he just met this girl and he liked and trusted her which was rare, he would often avoid strangers because he was afraid they would hurt him. he smiled back to her and walked next to her "ok sounds good"

(can we skip the boring part when they go and look for/pay for the room? also....do you have msn?)

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(OCC: I ws thinking that now they'er gonna wake up :D and that we already have skipped the boring part haha :D)

Alí was really tired, she was halfawake, when she realised that she was sleeping in the same bed as Sniper, and actually all cuddled up and half over him. He was so close, her eyes exploring his face, what to do? she didn't know how to react, she was the one getting up on the bed herself, but she couldn't really explain why, it just made her feel safe. She giggled a little and tried to sleep a bkit more, and maybe wake up before he did, but not long after that thought she fell asleep again. With a big smile on her face.

(yeah I have msn I'l send you a pm :))

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(OCC: I ws thinking that now they'er gonna wake up :D and that we already have skipped the boring part haha :D)

Alí was really tired, she was halfawake, when she realised that she was sleeping in the same bed as Sniper, and actually all cuddled up and half over him. He was so close, her eyes exploring his face, what to do? she didn't know how to react, she was the one getting up on the bed herself, but she couldn't really explain why, it just made her feel safe. She giggled a little and tried to sleep a bkit more, and maybe wake up before he did, but not long after that thought she fell asleep again. With a big smile on her face.

(yeah I have msn I'l send you a pm :))

after a while sniper started to snuggle his face into Ali's hair im his sleep

(this reply was short because I didnt come up whit more to write. i added you on msn now btw :3)

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(Thatt's ok :) )

Alí woke up, wth a shock, and looked so fast up at sniper that she hit him, it wasn't on purpose though, she stood half up, her shirt half of her without her noticing. she blushed all over her face, "I'm so sorry, you okay?" she whispered hoping he didn't wake op, she looked desperatly at him to see any kind of response.

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(Thatt's ok :) )

Alí woke up, wth a shock, and looked so fast up at sniper that she hit him, it wasn't on purpose though, she stood half up, her shirt half of her without her noticing. she blushed all over her face, "I'm so sorry, you okay?" she whispered hoping he didn't wake op, she looked desperatly at him to see any kind of response.

sniper looks up at her shock after she hit him "wah?" his still to sleepy to think clear and barly realised she slept next to him

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Alí sighed "damn he's awake...." she sat up straight, lookign around, looking at the room for the first time with light going through the window. She was a little unsecure but she didn't move away from him, she was quite comfortable. she took his tail and nuzzled it, just to have anything to do "so, what are you going to do now?" she looked at the halfawake Sniper.

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Alí sighed "damn he's awake...." she sat up straight, lookign around, looking at the room for the first time with light going through the window. She was a little unsecure but she didn't move away from him, she was quite comfortable. she took his tail and nuzzled it, just to have anything to do "so, what are you going to do now?" she looked at the halfawake Sniper.

when Sniper gotten more awake he realised that they slept together ti the same bed. his eyes got big and hes face ren and he was at a los of words

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Well morning sleepy head" she smiled big time at him, she realised he was blushing, and she instinctly blushed herself, but ignoring the fact that she was still on the bed. Her shirt was still half of her, she didn't let go of his tail, without holdng it too tight, she didn't know where to look, and looked at his tail instead "so.... where are we gonna go no?"

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Well morning sleepy head" she smiled big time at him, she realised he was blushing, and she instinctly blushed herself, but ignoring the fact that she was still on the bed. Her shirt was still half of her, she didn't let go of his tail, without holdng it too tight, she didn't know where to look, and looked at his tail instead "so.... where are we gonna go no?"

"well...uh... i... uh..." what to do? what to do? he just wanted to hide, this was way to embaresing

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Al looked down at him saying sorry with her eyes sne blushing she mumbled "I - I sorry I didn't mean to wake you up, and" she jumped if The bed and. Sat over at The couch, having nothing Else on her than a big shirt and trouses. Al didn't know what to dó, she Got scared that hé would run away from her.

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Al looked down at him saying sorry with her eyes sne blushing she mumbled "I - I sorry I didn't mean to wake you up, and" she jumped if The bed and. Sat over at The couch, having nothing Else on her than a big shirt and trouses. Al didn't know what to dó, she Got scared that hé would run away from her.

he had to say something, anything but what? what did you say at a situation like this? "uh... brekfast sounds good..." good anything to get away from the subject. he was hungry anyways

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Al sighed "yeah breakfeast Sounds nice, but we need to move on" she looked at him while her cheeks Got All red, she quickly took her clothes on. "I'm sorry i slept next to you" her bike started her engine and made a lous Sound, temmlig Them to move on!

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