A long one this, and one you may find surprising coming from me... still, please stick with it, I hope you'll find it worth the journey. Battle, angst, medical and legal drama - it's all in there. PG should be fine - there's no really graphic violence, no sex or nudity, no swearing - all rather dull, really ;) The setting is in the near future of the current series.
Part 1: Requiem for a White Mouse
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Really pleased by your reaction! Thanks so much.
*blinks. Tries to say something, fails. blinks again... nope, still not able to. blinks a third time...*
*finishes with nodding what bikachic said*
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What...? No way.
He's not dead! He can't be, it's Vincent Van Wham!
Appropriately startled reactions! >:D
*kicks his head on the wall* It's just a fanfic, it's just a fanfic...
Still, it's damn well written :blackeye: Even though I don't really like readin' this kind of.. fic. I suppose yer not gonna tell if he's comin' back or not, cause it's makin' me crazy X-|
*kicks his head on the wall* It's just a fanfic, it's just a fanfic...Still, it's damn well written :blackeye: Even though I don't really like readin' this kind of.. fic. I suppose yer not gonna tell if he's comin' back or not, cause it's makin' me crazy X-|
Of course not - I'm not going to start giving away plot spoilers with eleven chapters to go! >:D Please stay with it for at least the next chapter, anyway... Glad you like the style, if not the contents, anyway!
Phew, well done. Man...I really can't see where this is going to go...very excited to keep reading!
Poor Charley, it's a double blow for her. Well done! :D
*contemplates opening a book to take bets on the likelihood of Vinnie's survival*... $D ;)
*contemplates opening a book to take bets on the likelihood of Vinnie's survival*... $D ;)
You wouldn't be out to make a profit, who you? You being able to *ahem* 'tell the future'? ;)
Nescio quid dicas, dominus... *hides crystal ball behind back* :]
*secretly lures around the corner, trying if he sees something on the ball* Awww, hope yer gonna tell soon Fan X-|
Vinnie, you stand a far better chance of persuading Prodigal to give up the next chapter than of sneaking a peek in the crystal ball. *locks it away in the cupboard with the rest of the Palantirs*
And legions of Clawtroopers couldn't persuade me to divulge what I might (or might not) know! :D
Not even trading for a whole year supply of rootbeer and hotdogs? :o
Heh, yeah. Please Fan, post those fics! ^^
Oh, okay - since you're obviously not going to stop pestering me... ;)
Argh! X-| ...
You still writing the rest, or letting us wait on purpose? *Urging feeling wanting to read the rest, now *blinks* *
This is one heck of a fic...
No, it's all written. I'll let you stew for a bit, though >:D Glad you like it!
*Opens his head and sniffs the air* I think something's burning here...
Awwww ahhhhh... cheese!
*feels surely the coming month will be hard with full of Fan's fic* *blinks* *
*blinks* I go away for a few hours and you post 2 new chapters...
So when's the next chapter Prodigal?
Right now!
Part 2: Mars Lenus
Ooooh, this is gonna be one heck of a fic for sure... at least there some hope in it again *grin*
You know how to keep things things so like a huge cliffhanger! :o
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Thanks! Cliffhangers come from my training in Doctor Who fanfic.
Vinnie is just too stubborn to die.
Hmmmm, interesting. I like, I like ;) I admit you threw me a curveball, Fan. I thought that if Vinnie did survive (which was what I was clinging onto haha) then he would be a burned, bloody mess and any recovery would be from the explosion....but you threw in something new and mysterious. Hmmm
Can't wait to find out! :D
You don't think I'd do that his his "studly bod", now, do you? ;) All will become clear - eventually. Glad people are enjoying this, anyway. 'Mars Lenus', incidentally, was the Romano-Celtic God of War and Healing, which is kind of appropriate for a Martian military hospital.
Hmmmmmmm....I really want to find out what happens next. There's gotta be more than this, I know it, haha. Vinnie is lucky but not that lucky haha. Keep 'em coming, I'm loving it! :D
Well, it's true.. Vinnie's a troublemagnet aswell *smirks to him*
Hmm... possibly should have mentioned this before, but from now on, although it's not essential, things might make more sense if you've read my fanfic 'Friendly Fire'. Anyhow, we continue:
Love the explanation! :D I was actually a little bothered by the fact that Vinnie wasn't a bloody mess in spite of his studly bod, but I totally see where you were going with that...very well done! :D And now the new mystery...can't wait to see it unfold!
Glad you were satisfied with the explanation :D On now, on to the next Part:
Dark Times Part 3: In the Midst of Thine Enemies
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Oh my gosh.
Whoa.
I'm so glad this is part one and that there's more to come...this is amazing...so sad but sooooooo well done. I can't wait to read the rest! And I love that it's set in the new series, that's pretty rare from what I've seen.
Amazing.
Wow.
"I find hope and it gives me rest..."