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I don't know how to post this story on the fanfic page so please bare with me. Here's the summery and I want everyones opinion before I start the story. I'm going to do this in a sort of television series format from episode to episode kind of deal. Sorry if the summery is kind of long.

Summery: A new and fairly attractive mouse girl arrives in Chicago and she's rented a flat across the street from Charlie's garage. The Bros and Charlie thought that she was a regular Martian mouse until they find out something that makes them realize that she isn't even Martian at all. That thing is the fact that when her emotions are at an ultimate high, large and feathery white angel wings suddenly appear and grace her back. Each of the Bros then start to have different affections for and interests in her. With Throttle it's the fact that she's fairly culteral and she makes him feel free, Vinnie thinks she's about the most beautiful thing to hit the planetand constantly flirts with her but gets really shy and nervous when she just brushes it off because of her modesty and throws him a compliment back, but with Modo it's the biggest interest and attraction of all. The loveable big guy falls head over tail for her and loves everything about her. But because she comes from the planet that revolves around North Star, she only believes in meeting her soul mate so she's completely unaware of Modo's affection and devotion. Modo and the guys are determined to make her see that it might be one of them she's meant for and that destiny isn't always what it seems. But how can you convince someone to forget destiny when that someone was taught that destiny is the most important thing in the galaxy?

"When Life takes you for a hit, you've gotta bounce right back."

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Charley's Garage > Fanfic.

My opinion is I don't like romance, so wait til someone more useful comes along.

"You ride the waves and don't ask where they go."

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I like love stories, so sue me.

"When Life takes you for a hit, you've gotta bounce right back."

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Shaolin Webmonkey
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So do a lot of other people considering the proliferation of romances kicking around :)

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You wouldn't understand because you're a guy.

"When Life takes you for a hit, you've gotta bounce right back."

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Shaolin Webmonkey
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That is a very common misconception :)

Have you started writing the thing yet or you still waiting for feedback/tips/ideas? Coz I have a sneaking suspicion it may be one of the busy periods.

"You ride the waves and don't ask where they go."

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