17 December 2005 @ 3:36am
In an unusual move by me,I decided to do a story about an infant mouse named Noelle Holly whose parents were captured shortly after she was born. I won't tell you much more except for this timbit of news: Noelle is taken and dropped off outside Strain's office by her only other living relative who dies from his sickness shortly after leaving Arsis base and Noelle behind.
Sorry Blade this is just too difficult to read. Everything is running together and I can't tell where one thought starts and the other ends.
Maybe if you can separate each paragraph and then separate when the each caharcter is speaking it would help a great deal.
Sorry :'(
Morning
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